Initial Ideas

Synopsis of our Thriller


Beginning

A teenage girl of the age of about 16 was going to a party. She was dressed up in high heels, a dark short dress and a hand bag. Her paranoid dad (Colin) had warned her not to take the short cut to the party through the park, he said dangerous people hang around there. The girl ignores her dad and decides to meet her friend in the park, through Facebook chat, before heading to the party. As she heads to the park she notices shadows and other weird things. As she stands waiting for her friend, she gets out her phone and starts to text. Meanwhile a mysterious man in a suit starts to walk towards the girl. As the girl texts her friend 'where are you?' she replies 'what do you mean?' before she looks up and is suddenly kidnapped.

Middle 

The dad an ex-marine was actually part of a criminal dealing that went extremely wrong and was threatened by the criminals the life of his daughter. When the police go to explain that his daughter has been kidnapped and ask for any reason he may know of why, he doesn't reply. But inside his head he knows why and he knows that if he tells the police, the lives of the rest of his family will be in jeopardy. So he sets off to deal with criminals to get his daughter back. 

End

The man has to deal with criminals from all over England and eventually is led to Manchester where his daughter is being held and after dealing with the criminals regains his daughter.